Talk:Layla the sorceress/@comment-6195340-20141029214058

So... critique time.

In my opinion, Layla not having parents and living alone in a discreet location feels unoriginal and not unique, since about approximately 34% of all fan characters did not have parents and were living alone...

You might want to change the second sentence, too.

Her friends were the animals and the spirits that lived there

The world of STH already has animals so just only have "spirits" in that sentence.

I seen a lot of grammatical and spelling errors in the sentences so far.

And the backstory, despite its flaws, was really touching. My final score is 7.3/10. Don't think that is bad. That's actually the average score I ever rated any character. Good job.