Talk:MONTHLY ACTIVITIES: April 2019 Week 3 (Infiltration Story)/@comment-4107522-20190422153739

For Alex's story

Very detailed in how you describe the execution of the infiltration. It's fairly easy to follow the action and the introduction gives a clear idea of the characters and setting.

Main negative would be the characters seeming a bit too perfect in abilities and the puzzles being far too simple for a secret base.

That aside, an entertaining story that I'm glad to have read. It's energetic and that's an important trait for a story like this.