Talk:Cyanide "Cinos" Hedgehog/@comment-4107522-20161111195118/@comment-27077671-20161111200743

Gotcha. switches to critic mode

To the creator of this character: You need to work heavily on this character in several sections. His biography give little information to the reader to understand it as you do, and it seems too casually easy life for one not to call your character a "Gary Stu". Your character's powers are at the point of being a god, yet your character's personality and equipment say otherwise. With infinite strength and speed, who needs measly handguns? You need to elaborate on this "sword" more than you stated, as us readers do not know what you are talking about. Your character also has the ablility to copy one's moves. While this isn't bad on its own, you gave your character such a powerful form in itself, that it seems that the power is just to make your character even more flawless than ever. So I consider lowering the amount of power your character has, and more clearly explain the vague descriptions of your character's history and special equipment.

In summary: back to triggered mode Get rid of all the Gary Stuish stuff!