Thread:Red the hedgehog/@comment-4754456-20120209025504/@comment-4754456-20120229034341

Hey Red, just here to tell you that I've finally edited my story and Red is introduced. Sadly its only at the beginning of chapter 2 (part 1) though he plays a crucial role in part 3 which I'll post as soon as I can. Whenever you feel so inclined, and if its no trouble, maybe you could give me feedback on what requires improvement...I really don't wanna sabotage his awesome character...