Jasmine Critiques Fan Characters

Hi! So, I thought: "Hey! Why not give some critique to some characters? ('Cause this is TOTES original!!!111!1)

Anyway, If you want a detailed run-through of your character's page, just leave a link to your character's page in the waiting list below! Almost forgot, type your character's name before the link in the waiting list to avoid confusion.

Peace for now ^_^

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