User blog:Erik.wallace.395/Critique/Criticism

I would really love it if I could get some criticism and critiquing of my characters.

Erik the Okapi, Levy the Fox, Sarah the Fox, Kyra the Okapi, Melchi the Porcupine, Jemma the Echidna, Rift the Wholphin, Karolyn the Cat, Amber the Liger & Ming the Siamese Cat.