Talk:Phlak the Jackal/@comment-4107522-20170519180928

Sooooo, first this sounds like a great character in general with the backstory and such. The boxing background works with her power set nicely, though the motivation behind her wanting to be a boxer--or more specifically the money--does seem to be missing. I imagine that's something that'd be explored more when/if her secret past is shown off.

SECOND... I see a lot of times where you write "He", "His", and "Him" along with "Her"," She", and "Hers". Got confusing. @_@

Third, I couldn't help but be reminded a lot of Rynk with this (not in the bad way mind you), with the whole gang situations and such. It'd be quite cool to see the two meet some time.