Talk:Lily the wolf/@comment-25225264-20120226113153

It seems like you've drawn all of the pictures. if yes, you need improvment.

Although I'm quite happy that you've drawn, as it's a good alternative to recolouring, you do need to improve, like I said.

You need to remember to give them 5 fingers, giving them 3 looks like you haven't put much thought into you're work. Also, in one of the pictures her muzzle is WAY too long, and her head is too big. Maybe, before you start, make a circle using the circle tool and use that as a base, then just erase it afterwards.

Also in one of the pictures, the width of her tail changes, mainly because her arm is in front if it. This also makes it look like there isn't a lot of thought put into your drawings. And In the picture of her and Fluttershy (holy crap i know a ponies name), her arms are WAY too small, stand up straight with your arms straight by your sides, and see where abouts you're hands are. The arms should go at least to the hips, knees being a maximum. Another thing relating the arms is that in one of the pictures, one is longer than the other. To avoid this, try using a straight line as a base and a circle for the hands, then copy and paste it, flip it horizontally, and use it as the base for the other arm. It makes it much easier.

Now in the full body picture, her shoes look odd. First off, there WAY too small compared to her body and head, and the tops of them need to be the same width as the legs, otherwise it will look odd.

I suggest making a base before drawing your pictures. A circle the the head, an oval(made with the circle tool) for the body, and straight lines for the arms and legs, and circles for the hands. Also, it wouldn't hurt to look up some tutorials on DA or Youtube(or any other site for that matter).

I hope this helps, sorry if it isn't that good i only just woke up D8