Talk:Millie the Golden Retriever/@comment-15225862-20140405144836

Huh...this character is interesting. I do like seeing a new user first post a character that's NOT a hedgehog. There are some things I do like about her, and others that could be worked on...I'd think if she'd have a temper that bad, and beating up people that someone would probably pay some attention to that? Unless she's just beating up bad guys no one cares about...also, the whole "Sonic's girlfriend" thing...that's never a good idea really. The history could probably be worked on, her dying and being broughr back to life by Eggman and being told to kill Sonic resembles the whole "made by eggman to kill Sonic" plot. Also, when I saw "she was the princess..." I immediately thought "ugh here we go again..." But, at least she doesn't remember anything about it... These things are just a bit Mary-Sue-ish and I think if they were worked on would make her a lot better.

But I'm not saying it's all bad, there are some things I liked about it too (firstly that she's an animal not already in the franchise). I liked how you gave her a downside to having long hair, and not just "OH SHE HAS PERFECT LONG HAIR THAT MAGICALLY NEVER GETS IN HER WAY". The fact that she trips over her hair a lot makes it a bit more realistic. I also found the part about dolls funny. They are really creepy LOL.

I know you can't post images right away, but when you can, will there be images of her? (And I mean, NOT just Furry Doll Maker pictures)