Talk:Nocturn the wolf/@comment-24488813-20131127170030

I'll say this to you as nicely as I can...

It looks like amy rose.Change it up a bit...and I mean change everything up a bit.

If it's based off of yourself change that a bit too,make in an interesting character...BUT NOT TOO INTERESTING TO WHERE YOU MAKE IT HAVE AN OVER DRAMATIC BACKSTORY.

Oh wait...change the backstory as well...

Choose one ability for the character please it seems like you ripped off a couple of powers.

Make her a bit slower no character should be as fast as sonic.

And you stole silver's theme :I

and everything else the emeraldgreeny said.