Talk:River the Echidna (current version)/@comment-24694939-20140324080819

I'm loving your character OuO

design wise the only change i think she needs is to have her jeans made a tad shorter, either 3/4 or 2/3 because at the moment she kind of looks like she's wearing full length jeans but giving herself a wedgy and i think those styled jeans would probably suite her =P other than that i really like it and that part really isn't important anyway because it's only a minor detail ;)

and the back story i was a little worried about the sob story thing you mentioned when we talked but the back story is great, you actually gave reason behind the bullying and you didn't do something like her parents bashing her every night just because they can or eggman spontaniously killing everyone she loves in front of her. (plus the fact the reason you give actually makes a lot of sense)

Also the fact that you didn't ignore the cannon "knuckles is the last echidna" made me extremely happy, it's always been a slight disappointment when no one ever explains that so seeing someone actually explain it for once is really nice ;u; <3

the only thing i don't get is why her parents named her river when presumably everyone would have a fear of water? Personally i'd presume it'd be more likely she either changed her name in spite of the bullies while still holding a grudge or she was given the name others and took a liking to it