Talk:Spikes the Hedgehog/@comment-4107522-20200109165114

Spikes the Hedgehog Observations

~”He had a very nice childhood growing up with her family[…]” Was that meant to say HIS family?

~organisation” should be organization (don’t worry, these won’t all be grammar-related.)

~What’s the name of the organization that abducted Spikes and the others?

~How did Eggman Nega convince Spikes that killing Sonic would save his family? Without context, it comes across as rather blatantly a trick, and makes Spikes seem naïve. It’s easier to understand point a to b if we know more about what convinced Spikes that this was a good idea.

~I’m guessing that Max and Keith are members of team Atom. If so, it’s best to name-drop them earlier when Spikes first meets them: ala “There he met X, Y, and Z, and made Team Atom.”

~I know it’s a history summary, but this sharing-power super form for Spikes seems to be brand new when it appears. Was this something Spikes and the others knew they could do? If not, how would they react to using it for the first time?

~I’m assuming Spikes knows about Sonic from the whole Sonic Reborn project, but this makes it sound like he’s familiar with the rest of the main cast as well. How does Spikes know about them? Are they historical figures talked about often in the future?

~I see Spikes’s sister has a name later on. Could that also be included in the “The Search” section since she’s important to it?

~How did Spikes survive the self-destructing Nega Building exactly?

~The Two Year time-skip leaves a lot of confusion about what happened in between. Was Spikes part of the Peace Enforcers? What plans were stopped by them against Nega? What was he doing in space? How did Spikes save the day at the city?

~So Spikes casually time-travels to interact with past characters?

~BACKSTORY REVIEW SUMMARY

The backstory is very confusing unfortunately. It feels like a bunch of stuff is happening with little explanation or set-up. It’s not horrible, but there’s a lot of instances where characters know or do things that don’t seem like they’d know or know to.

Why is Eggman Nega the main villain? Is this set in the Prime Zone? If so, then Nega travel to it from his own universe? What about Blaze? Why is Nega mainly in the future? There needs to be some world-building at the start of this to explain why an established character would be in this. If this is your own version of these characters set in a completely alternate universe from Game Sonic and Game Blaze, that should be clarified.

I apologize if this comes across as harsh. Not my intent to tear anything down, I’m just being honest. Most of this comes from wanting to know more.