User blog:AngelFlames/Character Review 5:Sam the rabbit

Here we have the fastest green rabbit: | Sam the rabbit

Idea:Jet Set Ronnoc

We have Sam today for review.Lets get going!

Summary:

Super speed Sam can break the sound barrier (with ease) and increases speed the more he runs (until he reaches top speed) and can surpass the light barrier but it is unknown how much faster. Sam gets faster the longer he runs. So that's why Sam is the fastest rabbit alive. He has never lost a race and is one of the fastest out there.

Its a bit cliche..

Super peel out When Sam is at max running speed he does a super peel out (figure 8 technique) like Sonic does. He is rarely seen doing this as he has never met someone who is fast enough to make him do this. Sam doing a super peel outAdded by Sam237Same thing..kinda

Jumping Being a rabbit he can jump really high. This comes handy when battling flying foes. He has jumped up several tall buildings before with not much effort. He can jump higher than most Mobians. This is one of Sams main abilities but is one of the lesser known ones.

He Is a rabbit :L

Homing attack Like Sonic and others, Sam can can home onto a target and dash right into them from the air at Mach speeds.

Ok?

Spin dash Sam can do spin dash like hedgehogs, porcupines etc, but he isn't really good at it like others are. He is faster running but still fast doing the spin dash. This is a powerful move.

Cliche

Super dash When Sam is running he can go even faster by using his super dash move. It doesn't work if he's doing a super peel out because that's as fast as he can go. This kinda works as a boost or a really fast running animation. This will start once going at speeds above Mach 100.

Similar to Sonic's running thingy

Lightning Sam is able to punch and kick so fast that he can create a lightning effect. This comes in handy for running, kicking, punching ect (it makes his attacks and running more powerful and faster). He can't control lightning or anything like that he can only use it for an extra boost in speed and power. It's gives him extreme power to his punches

Oh cool C:

Parkour Sam can use parkour skills to help him navigate through the world. Sam's speed allows him to actually run on walls and his jumping grants him the ability to wall jump and more!

Its sky people!

Fighting Sam may not look it but he has some good fighting moves up his sleeve. He isn't the best fighter but his combination of speed, agility, jumping and skill he is one rabbit you dint wanna mess with ... Unless your more powerful than him *cough cough* Judas *cough cough*. He may be really weak but he is quite a pro at using his running momentum to pack a powerful punch (especially if using lightning punch).


 * shrugs*

Reflexes Sam has some pretty great reflexes and is pretty hard to hit with his reflexes and speed.

Trying to say flexable?

Lightning speed tornado Sam has the ability to run around in circles really fast to create a tornado fused with lightning to cause the victim to trip or get paralysed.

Similar to Sonic's blue tornado thing

I think you should erase some powers.Those right now is a bit too much.

Story
In a town called Fawkner there was a young 7 year old rabbit named Sam who didn't have many friends but had a mum, dad and a younger brother called Pad. He had 2 other friends, a young girl called Bailey (not yet obsessed with Sam, the good old days) and a wolf named Travis. They were pretty good friends with Travis being the more popular one. The town of Fawnker had a very special well in the middle of the town but it is blocked off. This well was special because it had a extremely rare pool of Chaos energy in it, which made it extremely dangerous to go down.

On a dark and cloudy day a large ship in the sky came towards Fawkner. The citizens were worried and scared when a big army of mutants came from behind the ship. Out from the ships hangar came out a little mini ship with a person in it. Once the ship landed in front of his army of mutants, he came out and revealed himself. He was a mutant who spoke into a megaphone and said "I am Lord Zugon, ruler of mutants everywhere. I have come in search for the chaos. if you refuse to hand it over my army will destroy you all!". The people of Fawkner refused his demand, which caused by Lord Zugon unleashing his mutant army upon the own.

The town's army came out to counter the mutants. The army of Fawkner was lead by Sam's dad, David the Weasel. After a while of fighting the mutants were winning the fight. While this was happening Sam was some place else having a run, but when he got back and saw the destruction that was taking place, he was shocked. Houses were getting invaded by mutants as soliders of the Fawkner army were falling rapidly. Eventually Sam's house got invaded, and Pad was kidnapped and was being taken back for mutation. David saw this a quickly chased after him. The mutant taking Pad got on a ship a flew off, but the mutant didn't know that David managed to climb abound the ship just before lift off. David went on to attack the mutant holding Pad captive, and when he was close enough he broke in to free Pad. David found Pad in a cell, without hesitation David bent the bars with his strength and grabbed Pad. Unfortunately, there were a couple more mutants there than he could take at once. He decided he had to drop Pad into the river down below and that he must defeat the the mutants by himself. So he dropped Pad in the river to avoid fall damage and he attempted to attack the mutants. But he got pushed out if the ship, falling to his death.

With his dad dead and his brother lost, Sam decided to try and get to his mum before she got taken. As he was zipping through the huge fight he got captured by a mutant and was being taken up to the gargantuan ship in the air. As they were about to dock the ship Sam managed to slip out of the mutants grasp. Unfortunately this made Sam fall down a long way, and as he was falling he noticed that he was going to hit the blocked off well of chaos energy. The seal blocking off the well was cracked and weak due the battle going on., and Sam's momentum from the fall broke through the seal into the pool of chaos energy. A few moments later a burst of light came through the broken well, revealing Sam. But he was different; he was a different colour and had new powers. He had transformed into a state of extreme power. Then in a burst of speed, Sam flew directly at the giant air ship where Lord Zugon now was. Sam blasted through the ship multiple times, forcing Zugon and the mutants to retreat from this unknown power. Sam followed the ship and managed to blast through the engines. Lord Zugon was taken down (well at least for now). Sam returned to Fawkner in this new form of Chaos with the news of Lord Zugon's defeat. Later that night the people of Fawnkner celebrated with a big party. Sam turned back to normal and reunited with his friends.

Nice job.Good work ^^

Notes:
Good work.Need some improvements on the powers and so.Anyways,good character!