Talk:Nimagi Stories: The Gods/@comment-4107522-20170524054808

It's nice to see more of how Chimera started up for sure...

BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT... This REALLY conflicts with just about any form of the Sonic franchise in terms of history. In games, Mobians could very well have been around for maybe tens of thousands of years, but Mobius is STILL future OUR Earth and they're still mutants that rose up from the aftermath of an apocalypse. Comic-wise, Mobians are about 2000-4000 years ahead of our time (depending on if you take the current year for the comics as being added to our clock or separate) and definitevely spawned from various chemical mutations from a fight with aliens called the Xorda in our time.

Also, if these are the origins for all time and such, there needs to be an explanation for how the Chaos Force, Chaos Emeralds, and so on comes to be. If we're going by game-logic, we also need to know about Gaia and how that plays out, and with the comics... well... Mobian magic, the Ancient Walkers, the Avatar, and so on.

As something separate from the franchise, this works, but as a Sonic thing, it clashes unfortunately.

When you're coming up with origins for how everything starts up based around a franchise you're making fan-material of, you really need to have it set up to mold around it. Not an easy task I'll admit.

I think the story could be left fairly untouched if the part about the mobians is cut out from the origin. The human part works fine enough, but even then, it'll need to account for modern day Eartha nd such.

I suppose I could also say something like "This conflicts with my lore because X created everything, and Y did this thing" but that's common with everybody so it's not like you need to change to suit everyone's preferences.

Sorry if this is a whole downer thing. I don't hve an issue with the quality of the story itself, just that some parts don't match up with the Sonic franchise itself as much.