Talk:Asonja the Hedgehog/@comment-17708066-20160919011257

Huh! Pretty good character you've got here, Silva! There are a few things I would suggest for Asonja, (Remember.. This is all just opinion. :D)

(This is the Suggestions part of my comment XD)

So far Asonja definetly has a frame work for his over all personality and general character. He is scarily relatable as a person. From my understandings, He's got some serious personal demons (Problems.) And the makings of a character arc. But from what it appears, Asonja never reaches a conclusion to his problems. 'Will he ever overcome his fear of combat? Or his depression? Will he ever put that big brain to use?? Will he teeter in his nutrallity, Or become the New Protagnaist/Antagonist of a story? '

This is what Literature likes to call.. A Static character. Asonja has all the makings of a dynamic character, but since he's undergone no/little personal chandge. He seems to remaine in the limbo of an unresolved story.