Talk:Dark Lord Riven/@comment-4107522-20161214205024

I like the comedic twist with this (and that we get a human), but I think the section where the "Battle" turns out to be them playing games and reading comic books could be tweeked a bit. I'm not sure if this was the original intension, but maybe it could be that the Oracle originally wanted to go through the battle, but then Riven convinced them to go with the video games and such instead.

I find this character to be rather unique. It's nice to see that he's a nice guy while still being a very lazy person. He still gets things done but outside of entertainment it also seems that he's not particularly ambitious.

I think the writing of his backstory got a bit too unprofessional (particularly the "ass-rape" part among others) but the story itself and descriptions were well-done.