User blog:SamanthaStar/Design critique help

Hello. I'm hoping that one of you guys can help me by critiquing my FC design, Mad Bone the Magpie. I think it could use with some improvements but I don't know how to change it. Anyone got any good critiques?



If it'll help, here's some of his traits: Helpful critique appriciated. No need to be harsh.
 * Trouble-loving
 * Bad (but not evil)
 * Solitary
 * Can bestow bad luck on people for one week
 * Lives in urban area but resides in a small tree-covered area
 * Fly type
 * Superstitious
 * If you would like some more information, just let me know.