Talk:Thorium the Hedgehog/@comment-30540936-20170914215150/@comment-30540936-20170914232853

Well, when making a character you shouldnt rely on a sad or dark past, instead try thinking of other ways to make him hiw he would be.

Ex: Isaac is a crossover character, it would explain him being undead.

Another thing would be a bit more creative in your wording, it looks like a younger person had made it. It has SOOOOOOOOOOO much potential right now though. But it needs a bit more worm