Talk:Szorra the Cat/@comment-4842918-20161106130804

Much like Midnight, she is physically OP, tbh. I suggest choosing one or a couple out of three physical parameters she is really good at. For example, my persona Joshua Zephyrius may be fast and smart, but his strength is subpar and his defense is low. Something like that to make him physically balanced.

Even though I myself am slightly turned off by her overpowered physical ability, I think it is toned down by her lack of offense-type mental abilities. However, this does not mean that she is generally balanced.

While this array of abilities is actually well thought out albeit few parameters are infeasible in my opinion (needless to say, the OP physical ability), she needs some normally accessible weaknesses.

"Szorra has been alone for so long that she is socially awkward, and not good with teamwork if she wants to do something else in the mission. This has been a good and bad thing for the team, depending on the situation."

This is not usually considered a weakness as an individual. I can say it is rather a character's personal flaw.

But hey, I understand that you are thinking hard for this character and I salute you for being quite technical with the info. Keep up the good work and do your best to improve your character! ^^