Talk:Joshua Sentrium Burns/@comment-25083225-20160814035615

The only criticism I can give for this character is that he's a bit OP. He has a gazillion weapons, sword proficiency, chaos powers, and good stats to back himself up whenever he doesn't have any of the other methods available. I would tone it down a bit tbh and give more attention to his personality and his backstory (when you write it)

also, how can having a short temper be a weakness when according to the personality section, he's relatively level headed and doesn't let his temper get the best of him? ( his emotions don't affect his strategic skill or keep himself from going farther than neutralizing someone)

While the elements come together to form a complete character who could fend for himself, it isn't a very flexible one: as in it can only be used in very particular RPs (if you were planning to RP with him, that is)