Talk:Annabelle Rich the Wolf/@comment-4107522-20170524183453

I think that as a splice-of-life/Young adult mystery character, this works very well for the usual drama and gossip with friends and relationships: learning from mistakes and the like.

I don't really see this as something that would need to be a Sonic-related page or character. Clearly in all these different types of zones, there are plenty of characters that don't center around "FIGHT THE EGGMAN OR WHATEVER TO SAVE THE PLANET WITH THE CHAOS EMERALDS", so in that way, this is refreshing, but perhaps it would be nice to see a bit of context with how this character's world fits in with the overall theme of the Sonic franchise, such as what the state of the world is like, if there an equivelent Sonic in it, status of the Chaos Emeralds or Chaos Force, and so on. Mind you, these aren't requirements exactly, but just easy points you can fill in to give people a more concrete belief in this being set in a Sonic The Hedgehog world.

Going back, however, to the mystery section, I think this can definitely work well as a young-adult mystery type thing. Maybe she and her friends come across various different cases aside from Jason's parents. It would be very cool to see some different little adventures written up on their profiles.

Of course, I haven't read the profiles for the other characters yet so maybe you've done that already. I dunno.

With the art, it's good, though I myself am REALLY not a fan of characters being sexualized with the big breasts and all that. I think it works with this character considering her personality.

That's just my own advice/criticism. Hopefully it doesn't come across as overly mean or anything.