Talk:Godslayer Mastema/@comment-4107522-20170227235554

Okay... let's try this again. Gonna be brief because the first time I tried this, it was long and then got deleted...

~I think it's good.

~I think the mulit-tailed kitsune thing should be changed, not because it's bad, but because it's overused. Maybe an ox, bison, or dino would fit more with the personality.

~I'd like to see more backstory on the combat side of his history, not because it's not realistic (it works) but just because it sounds like it would have an intersting section to offer in his life.

Now Imma save this in copy-paste and wait...