Talk:Diaboluos the Thylacine/@comment-24872060-20140918131342

Nice first character ^.^, may I suggest a few things? Maybe add a weakness to the character? This will make it not look like a "Mary Sue" character. And a few "spruce up" on the page wouldn't hurt much. Also if you need help with anything feel free to contact me on my "talk page" :), have a nice day.

(Target sighted...prepare for glory ((talk)) 13:13, September 18, 2014 (UTC))