User blog:CrusherKitty/Harvest the Golden Jackal Review

'''Roleplay: AfterStory. LOOK AT IT. JOIN IT.'''

Design reboot coming soon!

Good luck with the art ^^

'But I don't want to read through that whole roleplay, sorry 'bout that. Plus, I don't join page rps anymore because I always end up missing everything important. :('

Name: Harvest Darrow

Species: Golden Jackal...

Ability Type: Speed

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Fur Color: various shades of yellow/orange w/ brown/black tips of tail and muzzle

Hair Color: Black

Eye Color: Brown

Homeland: Central City, Underground system

'Did a bit of research, yep, this is a real area and I would probably assume there to be an underground city, so yeah. Nothing wrong so far, it's looking good so far.'

Likes, Dislikes, and MoralityEdit
Morality: Chaotic Neutral

Likes: Talking, music, excitement, friends, fun pranks, jokes

Dislikes: Stillness, Team Chaotix, Weaknesses

'Why does she dislike the Chaotix? D: Espio will throw ninja stars at your face Harvest. Nah, no problems here.'

Hobbies, Obsessions, and AddictionsEdit
Hobbies: Music (listening to and critiquing)

Obsessions: Mildly Lying

Addictions: Harvest has no addictions as of now

'Oh dear, does this mean she's going to develop an addiction? Ah, whatever. I can't really find anything wrong with this section and the ones prior.'

Friends and Enemies (ask before editing ((your OC must have met Harvest)))Edit
Friends: Luper the Dragonfly (Before Unleashed)

Neutral:

Enemies: Luper the Dragonfly (after/during events of Sonic Unleashed),

This chart we're all doing apparentlyEdit
I'm not doing this chart D: But then again I haven't made any characters in ages, if anything I need to get rid of a few.

Basic Stats (1 is weak, 10 is strong. Total can't be greater than 40. Can't have more than two main skills in 'Skill')

Agility (Ability to time your steps, and smoothly connect movements) I'll add in the stars later _________ 4

Speed (Speed) Adding in Stars later on________________ 8

Strength (Strength) Stars absent (for now)_____________ 3

Defense (Defense) I don't have the stars ready_______________ 2

Evasiveness (Dodging) Error 404: Stars not found_____________ 4

Dexterity (Fancy Evasiveness and Agility?) No Stars________________ 5

Intelligence (Strategically Planning, Common Sense, Ability to do math, etc.) Magicallyhorrifying is lacking stars________6

Skill (Raw Talent in character's main skill(s) [Stealth, assassination]) Nope, no stars here____________ 8

Total (Total) Stars are not prevalent at this time, thank you.____________40

'Ah, you don't need to keep mentioning the stars! Nevermind. OK, these stats don't look too bad. She's got skill, speed and above average intelligence, but she's not very strong, not too agile, not very defensive and isn't too good at dodging. Good, nice and balanced. That's how I like it.'

PowersEdit
Harvest can take the energy from other people's emotions and shape them into anything from pebbles to powerful rockets. However, the more power the item being created has, the more energy, and therefore, the more emotion that must be consumed in order to shape it.

'YAY! ORIGINALITY! '

'Usually, characters with emotionally based powers usually equate to power from anger, or characters being able to bend other's emotions. But one question, does this sap their feelings or keep them the same? Because I imagine using people's emotions would sap them a little, so that's just a thought.'

Harvest's graph of emotional power Elemental                                            Rockets, Cannons, etc.  Pebbles, 'Aura' Spheres, and 'Aura Spikes'                         Abilities  Bow            Pika-Pika Hammer          (only available if someone in super mode) |_______________________________|_________|___________________|________________________________________________|                              /\                               ||                                                <--- Emotional power required ---> Item Create- (and use-) able. 'Ah, I like this. You have clearly thought about this, which is more than some people do. Me gusta. Me gusta Harvest mucho, porque es muy interesantes. :3 Why did I say that in Spanish? Because why not. Sometimes I like to break up the monotony of reviews :)'

Certain emotions have various abilities as well (if the feeling is strong enough).

Anger: Fire abilities

Sadness: Ice abilities

Happiness: Solar (radioactive) abilities

Fear: Dark abilities

Confusion: Psychic abilities (needs significantly more emotion, difficult to pull off)

more to be added when I get ideas xD

'Lookin' good! :D The elements equate to emotions, nice. Yes, yes, I luv Harvest.'

Harvest detects the particular type of aura people are radiating using her 'aura vision.' While in this mode the world becomes engulfed in a gray mist, well... to HER eyes, for everyone else nothing changes. With the exception to the aura people are radiating, which stand out like a neon sticker on a black car.

'Does this make her sorta blind? I mean she can see the aura, yeah, but is this some form of DareDevil deal? (Marvel Comics, yay!) DareDevil is completely blind, but his senses are enhanced via radiation after an accident, so he could almost hear and sense where things were, like a bat's sorta. It's hard to explain, but HOW blind does she get? If she gets blind at all, can she see the outlines of objects, or just people's emotional aura?'

BackstoryEdit
Harvest, like most people, had a normal childhood, that is IF you consider you father being a rich crime boss within Central City normal!

I don't consider that normal at all D: You mislead me!

From heists to assassinations. If someone needed something shady done, if they weren't coming to one of his competitors, they were coming to Buster, Harvest's dad's, house. Underground..

I don't think dots after 'Underground' are needed here right, judging by the next sentence isn't capitalized?

within the slums. Despite this, the family gets along quite well! Roach, Harvest's brother, is basically her best friend (besides Luper, whom she's been lying to about the nature of her family their entire friendship, and consequently lying to her family about Luper's alignment).

'Wow, Harvest's a bit of a douche, isn't she? No offence, but lying to your closest friend, to get them to be your friend, that's actually pretty damn despicable!'

...

I like it!

Despite all this, she's not so sure if following the family tradition is such a good idea after-all.

To be honest with ya girl, you've lied to this 'Luper' character about your whole family, your skills are quite good and can easily be increased, your family doesn't sound like it's gone into controversy; I'd go for it!

Current HistoryEdit
After successfully kidnapping Professor Pickle for Dr.Eggman (by tricking Luper into helping her),

'Mm, now... This bit. This is a bit of canon bending to suit your character. In Unleashed, I am sure that Eggman gets his robots to do the kidnapping. I am not a fan of canon bending, not by a long shot. Eggman wouldn't need your character to go and kidnap someone for him, his robot lackeys can easily do that. This is a bit of a problem :S'

and because of that, basically assisting the world's destruction, the friendship between Harvest and Luper quickly collapsed (despite her good actions in Roleplay: AfterStory). Harvest still has trouble deciding between good and evil, especially considering the inescapable grip of getting caught. But even during her malicious exploits, occasionally she'll assist the good guys. Pranks, lying, and action are still her jams.

'So, a character with a moral dilemma, but a character that hasn't gone into dark, depressing and edgy behaviour because of it. Yay!'

Anyway, this could use a bit of work, mainly the 'kidnapping for Dr. Eggman' part.

PersonalityEdit
Harvest, as you might have noticed, lies a LOT. She lies to her family, she lies to her friends, and she lies to herself. Having quite a horrid fear of failure, Harvest has told EVERYONE she's as perfect as it gets (although looks... not so much), and has begun to shift into quite the arrogant person in reality. However, she still loves to hang with friends, make new ones, and can be quite fun to hang with

'So, a pathological liar? I'm pretty sure some people would pick up on that, but okay. I also can't really imagine that she would be fun to hang with, being quite the liar and a bit arrogant. Maybe expand this to show personality shifts around people she likes, or alternatively, including how good of a liar she actually is. I think she'd be a good one, because she obviously managed to lead Luper on, but Luper might just be a bit derpy or overly trusting.'

'Right, I'm guessing this means we move onto the final score! Okay, the art is nice, but I don't usually let that effect the final score. For example, if you want your eyes to be blinded, search up 'Princess Neon Boom'. It's a horrific character that's an assault on the sight, but I will admit that the art is pretty good, so anyway, enough rambling...'

'I give Harvest a 7.5/10. She's very underrated and I look forward to seeing more development. I think some things do need to be addressed, though, which is what I mentioned above. Anyway, good job, I look forard to seeing future characters and future development! Awesome job!'

*Claps for you!*