Talk:Gem High: Year Two/@comment-24257447-20140606142138/@comment-7270135-20140606164646

Yeah that one, ahem, anyways, storytime!

So I tried to kind of foreshadow it in an earlier chapter when Riv mentioned that she forgot about her homework, and that she would work on it during break. Basically, she would have been working on it and such, and I would have made it that by the end of break she accidentally left one of her notebooks outside of the school. So then that in 4th period, she would have realized that it was missing, and I was hoping that the teacher would give her permission to go out and find it.

Aaaaand then she would be wandering the school for a little bit before remembering that she left it outside, and so she goes back to where she was and finds it on the ground. But after getting it, she looks up and LE GASP, Elias was there.

Then of course she would have gotten freaked out, tried to run back into the school but he would hold her back by her weak shoulder, and they would get into another arguement. I didn't exactly have the dialogue figured out, but let's just say that Elias got about twice as pissed than their last fight and as a result he kind of threw her down onto the concrete, where she was then knocked unconcious (normally she would have been able to get up, but since she was already exhausted and injured beforehand it knocked her out). Then I was thinking of showing that he has a little bit of a heart by having him freak out a bit, but then realizing that she was only passed out, and he leaves before anyone else can interfere...

Then I was hoping that maybe another character would realize that she was gone for a while and try looking for her, and then find her unconcious outside of the school, and then a bunch of other crap would happen, so yeah...