Talk:Scintilla the Squarespot/@comment-25083225-20160421053520/@comment-24497258-20160424011336

Thank you very, very much for this review! It has helped me so much in developing Scintilla and I am still keeping it in mind as I go. I feel comfortable in keeping his design as is, and he shall not be a fighter. I see what you mean with the fonts as I DID copypaste some of it from a word document - this is low priority but I may get to it once I write out many more things for him / organize some more. It's still hard to notice, it seems. As for the entire layout - yeah, it's pretty weird. I've gotten rid of the unneeded content as suggested and I've organized fears to be under personality traits as well as I have added sub headers. Extra facts has been made and I've over all just been working on rewording / making things flow better. I feel that I may keep bullet points to some degree but I will be writing a large amount of things in personality traits / likes and dislikes. I already knew it was a lazy, bare seeming category that needed much more flavor...But knowing it also looks like that to other people has helped me motivate myself quickly. I have already worked on making it much better. Thank you, again! I will be continuously working on him. I am currently creating two other characters who have some relation with him...They are not ready for the internet yet but when the time comes I would be thrilled to get your opinion! I can say that one is a Spider and one is a Scorpion, though.