Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-24918083-20140804161255/@comment-24516579-20140823081452

I just read the whole chapter, you used Cyndriz and Jacob perfectly, Jacob wasn't sure about trusting Eggman, Cyndriz made fun of Eggmans mustache and PODRIDO WOODS IS MENTIONED (unless the forest being nearby was a coincidence.)! the errors I noticed are that eggman's name is absent for most of the time and there is the fact that Cyndriz and Jacob arn't mobians and don't live on it either.

Anyway, it has been the most enjoyable chapter yet.