Talk:MONTHLY ACTIVITIES: April 2019 Week 3 (Infiltration Story)/@comment-4107522-20190422154032

For Sky's story

You'll have to remind me in the future to read the rest of the chapters as well. I went through Chapter 3 and some of 4 for now, and I find your characters particularly endearing. The "lovestruck butthurt" line was cute and funny at the same time, and I really get a feel for who these characters are.

As for the main point of the scene, however, there's not too much that involves the infiltration, making it very short, which would be my main criticism considering what the prompt was.

All that considered, it was still a very pleasant read to go through as the characters were very likeable and fun to follow.