Talk:Max The Fox/@comment-12939469-20131207153342

You know, "alias" just means nickname. Also, this character seems gary-stu-ish, what with the overused "missing parents" story. I suggest putting a little more thought into the character before posting. For example, maybe their story should have a little more in it, and you could try to think up a different plot than "losing their parents then finding girlfriends". Basically, add more detail! How did they lose their parents? When did they meet their girls? What happened during their adventures?