Talk:Spike557 - Spike The Hedgehog (Destructive life form)/@comment-4029377-20170713153604/@comment-4029377-20170714144220

Well the good part is that clearly you put some time into making this, however I would try to refrain form using this much of the main lore and perhaps adjusting it to where you can lead into expansive universe and not just rely on the main cast and themes of the main series, at least just by that. It would be interesting if you expanded upon this and tried to seek themes not fount in the normal Sonic story. Trust me, eventually the main lore will become a crutch.