Board Thread:Questions and Answers/@comment-28783034-20170617164500/@comment-24872060-20170617220156

Its a good start, lots of potential. But there are some things that needs to be iron out first. For example you have stated his power, but what about his weakness. A great character comes with both weakness and streangth, this also help you develope the character during roleplays (if you choose to join them). Another thing would be a bit more information, if you can, that describes about him more. There are a few more issues, but are simple and could be refine. My advice is to hit the "random page" button and see some of our other user's pages and characters to gain some inspiration.