Talk:Shad (26 +),god of trickery/@comment-25083225-20160818163353

This character has barely any backstory, no personality description generic powers (being able to punch isn't a power, and a god shouldn't have to engage in a fistfight, considering that he can control fate). The stats are inflated and made highed than the limit it even imposed on itself (61 when the "...Total can't be greater than 40"). Plus, the whole being a god, angel, demon, or any other spiritual entity in the Sonic fandom is a huge cliche that I'd recommend staying away from.

As constructive criticism, please fix the grammatical erros in this post and develop the character more.