Talk:Zidi the Bat/@comment-17708066-20160806092623

Heya there! I've got a bit of constructive critisism on your FC. (But I mean it in the best way, I just wanna see Your characters thrive 😊)

Zidi seems pretty undevelpoed in terms of her personality and history. Having likes and dislikes can be part of a characters personality, but it can't be the only thing about her. Try using some Descriptive adjectives in there! (i.e; Zidi is a bubbly and outgoing gal.)