Talk:HED Mobians/@comment-4107522-20180907020306

I’d suggest specifying that when you say “normal Mobians” you mean YOUR zone’s version of Mobians, because there are various types of mobians that actually DO have toes and feet from different versions of the Sonic franchise  Additionally, there are mobians who look more normal-anthro as it may be called, like the Wolf Clan.

The True Potential Attribute power sounds cool and is well-introduced. Seeing that they can evolve or upgrade as it were gives a nice image for what kind of designs that could lead to.

The elemental attributes described sound very pokemon-like, not in a bad way mind you. It shows a nice balance of abilities and weaknesses in a nice package. All of these traits and classes show a nice sense of organization and depth. It really looks like you put effort into making these balanced.

However there are a few things that I think would be confusing in the Warrior Rank area. Considering how many different versions there are of these characters, and the fact that not everyone agrees with how powerful they all are in comparison to each other (for instance, I’m sure many people would argue Silver is far higher in strength comparison to Rouge, or that Shadow is higher than Sonic), so perhaps a different equivalent to compare to would work better, like a power-output based on weight or scale.

Also Hyper Sonic isn’t canon anymore… which… upsets me to no end, but yeah, unfortunately he doesn’t… count anymore… *sigh*

The last thing I have to point out really is the Invulnerabilities portion. I noticed that they can feel pain, but I don’t see a way that they can actually be damaged, especially if their lungs can’t be collapsed with the rest of their skin and body being basically indestructible. I get that blunt-force trauma can NORMALLY still hurt someone with a hard shell (like Luke Cage) but their organs can’t be penetrated, which means blunt-force does nothing.

I think CERTAIN organs or areas of the body should be invulnerable and others shouldn’t, or at the very least that they be made highly durable, but not impenetrable.

That’s all I really have for this. Sorry if it’s a lot to take in, but it’s just what I noticed and it comes from a desire to see improvement. Most of my criticism isn’t even against your species as much as how they’re presented. You have a nice species so far here, and I’m very much interested to see how things go continuing forward.