User blog:AngelFlames/Character Review:Max The Fox

Alright! The first character we'll be reviewing is : Max The Fox

Idea belongs to:Jet Set Ronnoc

Alright,lets get this show on the road.

Personality
Summary:

max is a rocking fox who likes to play music on how he feels. he's capable of doing things for himself even with his left eye covered. He's afraid of his fears but will stand up to them. He's willing to go through many obstacles to find what he's searching for. very courageous but somewhat vain

.w. ....Meep.Its a meh..I've never interacted with Max so i will have to go with Meh..

Bio
Here's a summary:

Max and his bro Zack have been looking for their parents sense they were kids but before they appeared at mobius they were in their home with their parents when all of a sudden a giant overlord came and attacked their home first their parents attacked the monster but the monster killed their parents then the monster vanished. While at Mobius they have made friends and they both got girlfriends Zack and Max entered the caves of the forbidden power when they saw Alice and Alexis hanging over lava. Then Max and Zack saved Alice and Alexis by cutting the rope with his fire move then Alice and Max and Alexis and Zack fell in love and they started dating. Now Max, Zack, Alice, and Alexis go on adventures trying to find their parents they had to climb the flaming mountain they still have a lot more obstacles ahead of them. Alright...its ok...not trying to be a grammer nazi but fix some words plox C: -shothard-Some sentences doesnt really have periods which makes things really confusing..also,things need to be adjusted a little so readers doesnt get confused.However another thing is that .n. ....is 11 year olds suppose to be dating at young age? I would..change the age a bit more :L...but doesnt matter.. ===Notes=== By looking at the page,it needs more information such as his stats and powers..However i would give him at least 4 powers..There are also headings so you can seperate information.It would be easier that way.Even though i never interact with Max,I would still improve it.Use headings will be more easier.

Improve please.Add more informations

Emily out!