User blog comment:Detective SkullWolf/Character Reviews (Again)/@comment-25304404-20141109123912/@comment-27765057-20141125230428

Let's see what we have here.

Appearance -

I like her design. It's simple and the color scheme is nice. My only issue is that one might look at her face and think she's a fox rather than a cat. An easy solution is to incorporate whiskers into her design.

Backstory -

This is a pretty simple backstory compared to some of the others I have reviewed, which can be both a good and bad thing depending on how you look at it. I'll go ahead and say that nothing is wrong with the story you have so far, but it would not hurt to add on to it so we can learn more about her. If you aren't sure what to write about, here are some ideas, free of charge:


 * Family Life


 * School Life (I'm curious as to what such a town would be teaching the children. How to live on their own?)


 * Some of her adventures

Powers -

I'm going to focus on her main power: Weapon-Conjuring. A pretty nifty trick, though I'm curious as to whether it was inherited (somehow?) or if it was learnt. I'm also curious as to whether she's using some kind of energy (life energy?) to create these weapons or if she's pulling them from somewhere else in the world. If it's the latter, then it would be neat if she began training herself to choose where she's taking the weapons from, allowing her to disarm enemies.

Stats -

Nice and balanced, just how I like a character.

Conclusion -

You've done a good job with this character so far. Feel free to consider any suggestions I made and good luck with your future edits.