Talk:Emily the Hedgehog/@comment-4386398-20130501080533

i think you should improve this alot. at the moment, this is a very good example for a mary sue. her look is just the girl in the pic below, with black hair. the original costume is very beautiful, and you just bothered to change the hair and say the costume is a brand bew creation and that it can be found only at emily. also, her story is just a tragic story of her family killed by G.U.N. that what happened to most of mary sues. tragic past. also, she can control time. ok if she only had that power, it would have been better. but no! an angel blade and also shadow powers match perfect, dont they??? it is like a mix of the most unwanted and unexpected features. oh... wait there is more! telepathy, teleportation and having anime battle costumes at any time and place.... the first time i saw this i was like: oh look! shadow and maria have a dauther. and that is what this character looks like. parts of shadow powers, and the costume of her mother! isn't that cute? oh! did i see well? she is immortal! emily is immortal! even better! oh... but shadows can kill her. so she can die if another guy's shadow covers emily? well she should better go to the sun, shadows can't exist there, and anyway emily is immortal, so she cannot be burned! you should better work on this very hard, if you love your character that much.