Talk:Alex Edurus/@comment-4107522-20190929171731

GENERAL INFO

~Good intro for character.

APPEARANCE

~Again, specification as human would be good. Aside from that, good description, if a bit short.

PERSONALITY

~I think it may help to put subcategories for the personality so it’s not too long or overwhelming for people to read. You can put POSITIVE and NEGATIVE traits, as well as MANNERISMS, DISLIKES, LIKES, etc. What you have here is good stuff, it’s just a little messy.

HISTORY

~Same as the others, just some more info on his early background, living conditions, and so on. What you have so far is good though. Just needs more.

Not much else to add for the rest. It all seems fairly balanced