Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-27032473-20190622203635/@comment-25880977-20190705232649

I have a few points I'd like to share that'd improve on Sid. Most of them are suggestions and not like "Change this NOW" kind of things!

Shorter Discriptions: I think some of the discriptions could be shortened such as the bits on speed/strength/durrability/willpower.

Origin: The story is fine, and while it's used a lot It's not like it's against the rules to have dead parents. What I'm not up for is the change from Human to hybrid, it feels unnessesary and I think it'd be better if the shining light he got hit by just gave him the ergokinesis.

Species/Look: Being a human/butterfly/squirrel hybrid is a little off the wall. Having a simple Butterfly would be great as there's not many of those even. For general looks I'd give him a muzzle and a nose, I know butterflys don't have though, but Charmy Bee does so might as well fit in, though I'd have the nose be pointy like metal sonic. The antenna look like Cockroach antenna instead of a butterfly's, the brown color scheme doesn't help with that. If you want I could draw a mockup of what I see he could be like!