Talk:Raven the Cyberhog/@comment-29621020-20181119200715

Whelp… not much I can say that hasn't already been said. So, I'll just nitpick a few things that drive me absolutely nuts. Don't get me wrong, I love Raven (don't ask me why, I can't put what my gut says into words). The things I'm going to list just makes my inner artist or writer want to throw my computer out a window.


 * That first quote is a bit of a mouthful, which has a tendency to make viewers dread reading the rest of your article. I'd sudgest using that quote you have under his picture as your opening and putting that other mouthful in a seperate 'notable quotes' section or something.


 * Speaking of a mouthful, those names man. I didn't even bother reading through them all because I knew I'd fall asleep by the first one! Just use the name their most commonly referred to by. If you end up making a page for them, you can use that full name.


 * “guardian of the four Raggadak Gems”-… just-… argh! I'd need 12 hands to name the amount of characters that are guardians of some sort of jewelery (I made that mistake a few years ago too. Trust me, I still cringe!)


 * Also, please, for the love of God! DON'T use the term Cyberhog! Just say, Cyborg Hedgehog. It's not that hard.


 * Also also, now that I mentioned it, why does he have to be a hedgehog? The animal kingdom is so bloody vast, yet everyone and their grandmother makes their character a hedgehog. Just… why? I've practically sworn off making any of my characters a hedgehog because I just want to put my head through a wall when I use the word!


 * Then there's the combination of red and green. I know the colors go well but I've come to feel the same way about it as I feel about hedgehogs.

Aaaand, that's about it.

Plus, I find that gender switching ability to be really cute and original. Especially since it's not his main power (it's kinda useless as a main power to me anyway.)