Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-24918083-20140804161255/@comment-24516579-20140807184154

Titanium562 wrote: TheRealDylanator wrote: Chapter 1.

The 13th line is missing a him before a comma.

The 26th line is missing Eggman after present.

Apart from that its great! Ohhhhhh. But thanks! By the way, please can I have Jacob Laysedi's personality. :3 IT'S NOT ON THE PAGE O_O.

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