Talk:Chloe the fox/@comment-2081000-20130826101935

Hello Red! I know it's been a short while but i'm here to review Chloe now!

About Chloe
I don't have much of a problem with this section. You could possibly add some more detail into her personality. I do like her design though!

I do have a question about why she decided to get a degree in Sociology. Does that link in anywhere else? Does she use what she learns in the future?

And I think you could have put that paragraph into a background section about her maybe?

Other Info
One thing i'm sort of questioning is the IQ level? I mean I thought that was a high number so i looked some things up and found that would mean she's like a child prodigy or something. Wouldn't she have used her smarts for something more advanced than Sociology? (No offense to any sociologists). I mean it says that she stole Red's DNA so maybe she could be a biologist.

Powers
I think her powers are balanced out though i was questioning the regular temperature? I'm guessing it is in Fahrenheit though which wouldn't be so bad. Cause if it was in Celsius that would mean she'd be boiling all the water she touched.

Conclusion
Overall I think that she's a nice character. I think that it's good character progression that she got over red and wanted to start anew.

I do thing the page needs a bit of a revamp though, because of the missing links and could maybe sort the sections out? I would be happy to help if wanted.