User blog:Oneheart/COMIC COMING SOON?

H-hey peeps, Oneheart here! Just wanting to know if you think I should do a comic. I'm still waiting on a reply for permission (since I am using a fragment of someone else's idea..), but I am really hoping I get permission! I have 5 pages already ready to post. So if you like the idea, tell me in the comments section!

WHAT IT SHALL BE ABOUT: It all starts in a town in Oberstdorf, Germany. A girl and her best friend are chatting away as a claimer approches them asking their age(The first page has the characters speaking). The second page is further told by Eos, the little mink girl that was claimed by Stephen. Stephen is a wealthy man tht traveled the world in search of his perfect bride. When he went to Germany, he found his perfect (Eos). THAT IS JUST THE FIRST PAGES SUMMARY. The actual story is about Stephen and Eos traveling having stood in Mexico for 4 years (it is explained in comic pages 6 or 7).  I know this is really confusing, so ask me if you have any questions, or are just lazy and want a short summary from me in the comments ^ ^;!

ABOUT THE TIMELINE
''It's in Sonic the Hedgehog's time (I have no idea how many years in the future), but also in another timeline.In this timeline, men have more rights than women. In this timeline, men can "claim" women as long as they are in thier "age range". The "age range" is a system for men that will tell them wich age group of women they are allowed to choose from. The whole world is like this, under a group of male Mobians and Humans called the 10 Million Fathers. ''

ABOUT THE TEN MILLION FATHERS
It is what it says, a wealthy group of 10 million men making laws and decisions for all of Mobious. The laws make up of what they say. As long as one law is approved by ten members of the "10 Mil" (short for 10 Million Fathers), the law can be passed. AS you can imagine, this system is corrupt and does not make much sense as it used to when it first started.