Talk:Dash the Turtle/@comment-26433528-20150601184104

Pix3lPotato's Friendly and Constructive Criticism.

Wow. The design is really original. I have never seen a turtle in the Sonic universe. I am going to skip the fact that he's fast because of the IRONY. He's pretty balanced as well Holy crap he can run on ceilings?! Lots of artwork, it's really cool. Surprisingly, I don't see any major flaws. So here's some nitpicks:

Dark Dash can take out people's hearts. Seriously, that's a bit brutal.

His peel-out looks like a 7. Now, Sonic's peel-out just coincidentally looks like an 8 (or infinity). It's not number based. Shout out to the fan character whose peel-out looks like a 4!


 * "no one actually knows what his colour is, even himself (River told him once, but he fell off a balcone and landed his head on a rock, losing his memory of what colour he is)"

This is just... Ugh... MiniRant incoming...

CAN'T HE JUST LOOK AT HIS ARMS?! OR IN A MIRROR GODDAMMIT?! CAN'T ANYONE TELL HIM OR WHAT?! ALSO, HOW COME "NO-ONE KNOWS WHAT HIS COLOR IS"?! THIS DOESN'T MAKE ANY SEN--

End of MiniRant.

Sorry for that.

So that's it, really. Nothing else to say, or did I forget anything? Oh, yes.

"MMMAAARRRSSSHHHMMMAAALLLOOOWWWSSS"

Done. Bonus points for that quote.

End of Pix3lPotato's Friendly and Constructive Criticism.