Talk:Hero the Hedgehog/@comment-4552523-20120215164040

Omg im going to rate Hero's originality or something Im only doing this to help you from people that start hate you because of this chara

1/10 = Extremely unoriginal 10/10 = The most original I ever saw omg

Character's look: 5/10 It's a red hedgehog with some bangs, and, yeah, It's a bit unoriginal. If you would give him some messed up spines, or some messed up bangs. And he has a grey jacket, maybe if you would paste a logo on it? The rest is okay I guess, because it's a hedgehog and they look like this.

Name and basic info: 7/10 I think the name IS a bit unoriginal. You could make up a new name for him, and make Hero one of his nicknames? Well, he has a normal age lol ;D

Powers, super forms and abitilies: 5/10 Well, on the rolepay I saw how Hero used his powers. It's Gary Stuey, because, c'mon, he can just teleport anyone who he wants to any place he wants. If you want to keep his power, then make it a bit weaker, like he can only teleport people from special places.

Backstory: 6/10 I don't really get it. He had a family, while he is a failed experiment? Really, you should work on that. And the failing experiment and deceased family theory is unoriginal because almost everybody uses it. Hyprocrite lol The second part is a bit more original, thought.

Others: 8/10 The thing about the killing form is acctually original, it gives your character flaws. Without them the character would be unoriginal. The quote uhm, well, it doesn't say anything like "I can handle that", so the character isn't a Gary Stu.

Total: 6/10 Things you could improve: The characters look, the powers

Once again, this is just to help you. ;D