User blog:Y-Tiger/Idea for a story!

I was thinking of a story by listening to thise song --->

I was thinking of using Baine, and Baine being the main character. But... I'm unsure if I should write the story myself. I'm not good at writing stories, and I end up never finishing even *Sweatdrop* How bad am I?

Anyway, here is a W.I.P picture with the idea.

The only issues I have is. Who is the main villan, WHAT is the main villan (I was thinking something that wasn't mobain. But, that's me.) I like to have input about this. And I love it if I gotten up. I'll try to finish this once I figure out the villan. (Cause the villan is either killing or kidnapping Baine. As you see the water is showing XD) Also, Baine isn't using powers to see the future and all that. Something else is warning her of the future coming. But... I don't know what that thing would be either ^^; I would think Alida, but... I don't know.