Talk:Project Code Name "Fallen Star"/@comment-4552523-20140225142311

So I really like this so far, I like your writing style. I like your use of adjectives ("frail") and nouns ("drapes (of blood)"), and your sense of humour (points at the part where Knuckles can't really pick up Tobias). What bugged me a bit was that you put "his aching head" after describing Tobias having a headache, like, you know, it's kind of double

But I can't wait to see more 83