Talk:Ion The Hedgehog/@comment-24036667-20140923213827

Just fixed it a lil' y'know the grammar.

You used commas a bit.

If this is your first character not bad.However I'd say it needs a bit of improvment.

Keep up the good work and you'll get better.

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Gender: Male

Age: 17

Birthplace: Core City

Occupation: Core City Guardians (My canon.)

Full Name: Mike Alexander King

Nicknames: Ion

Birth Abilities: Super speed, instinct sense, vision prediction, ionic boost, homing attack, homing kick and atomic form.

Learned Skill(s): Swordsmanship.

Weakness(es): Darkness

Backstory Edit
Ion was a normal hedgehog, living life to his fullest.However after seeing that his life changed once he discoved his abilities he now is a hero and a member of the Core City Guardians.As the current leader, he claims that he can use atomic energy and proved his claim.He also has exceeded the base Guardian Form.

Personality Edit
Ion is serious, dedicated and very focused fighter.But when not in combat he is calm and kind.

Guardian Forms Edit
This is inspired by Jonic's Trance forms.

Basic Guardian Edit
In this form his fur is red as in atomic and his aura is orange. <--(This sentence idk???) His atomic energy power has increased by 20%, meaning that he gets a power boost.

Guardian A (Atomic) Edit
This is the second stage of the Guardian Forms.His fur is orange/red and his aura is dark red.His atomic energy power has increased by 20% once again.Totaling up the power boost to 40%.

Guardian C (Crisis) Edit
In this last stage of the Guardian Form his power is off the charts.This form can't kill him but if he stays in this form for too long he goes into a coma like sleep.His fur is grey, his aura is black and his eye color changes to red.