Talk:Queen Luna the Cat/@comment-4386398-20120915150129

look, i know luna is based on my little pony, but her character needs a little retouching. ok she can be bad, aggressive, dark. but the things that make her less original are the fact that she is the queen of the universe. she can be related to royality, she can rule the equestria, but beeing the queen of moon, sun, UNIVERSE? this really pisses me off becuase way many people want to rule the world, so thats a ussual thing. rulling the universe doesnt point your character out, letting others see something special at it. it makes it more random! other things that makes her less original is being overpowered! she can control fire, dark, water, ice, light, magic. thats way to much power. an original character has only 1, occasionaly 2 well-mastered powers! but luna can control nearly all the existing elemental powers. as i said, many people want to have power!

and "many" points to random, and randomnes deosnt make your character special. give her less powers. she can control dark, and maybe she can use magic. only those 2 powers fit her potential and characteristic.

and also, having this age points to invincibility and immortality. being born at the start of the world means that she was just a little baby, witch had the incredible power to survive the space vacuum, until the earth was born! that means she has many powers, and also extreme durability!

ok lets say you give her only dark and magic powers. but adding the abilty of being vampire makes her less original. she takes away many weaknesses, and also adds back her immortality (vampires are immortal). and an original character is better if it has more weaknesses than powers because ya, it will make you character lose fights sometimes, but losing fights gives the character the chance to learn something! (and also, winning is not everything!)

also, a character based on something else, like luna based on my little pony, takes way that "unique" a character should have. make your own story, think at something no one would've think about! make it UNIQUE!

hope you understand my critism, hope you will accept it, and hope you wont see this comment made by bad purpose.