Thread:Alphonse Uprising/@comment-25166631-20150130060531

Heylo there Alph.

Recently, I've been thinking about rebooting my character's universe with a new story to make it seem more original. And since Alinoa is listed in RTW: Rising, I thought I would let you know and get your opinions on this.

''Just a heads up, I tried to base this a thousand years after the Archie canon. So no canon characters as of yet (Maybe Shadow, seeing as how he's immortal).''

'''The story starts in the year 4235, a full one thousand years separated from the current story. War has been raging throughout Mobius for the past decade between Mobians and Humans. Each race of Mobian, led by a single representive, choose their alleigance to either side. Most races such as the Hedgehogs, Foxes, Echidnas, Wolves, Cats ect, choose to side with their Mobian breatheren. However, a select few races have decided to side with the Humans in hope of survival. These include the Minks, Bats, Rabbits and the Babylonians.'''

'''At the fore-front of the Human's command is Professor Ludwig Robotnik, one in the long line of grandchildren to the late Dr Ivo Robotnik, commonly referred to as Eggman. After discovering his heritage, Ludwig started building a new robotic army with the new futuristic technology in order to continue the legacy his ancestor created. '''

'''WIth Ludwig having a monopoly on almost all of Mobius, he sends different species to war with other species. The Hedgehogs and Foxes against the Babylonians across the United Federation, the Echidnas against the Minks in Adabat, the Wolves against the Bats in Holoska, and the Cats against the Rabbits in Chun Nan. Any species not mentioned here are either neutral or undecided.'''

'''Additionally, Ludwig found a green hedgehog encased underground in a pod. Apon awaking, he identified himself as Xenocrates Synder. As it turns out, he was made by Dr Ivo Robotnik using an artificial body and the consiousness of a long-deceased Roman soldier. After persuasion, Xenocrates, later nicknamed Xeno, became Ludwig's personal assassin. '''

However, with Sonic the Hedgehog and his friends being long dead, there's no hero to put an end to Ludwig's master plan.

'''With our focus switched to Holoska, a Wolf soldier by the name of Brian Moreno is currently serving his part during the Wolf-Bat war. During the conflict, he met a medic named Sarah, who saved his life after taking seven gun wounds and three stab wounds. Over time, the two fell into a deep romance and eventually got married. They only had one child, named Tyson. They were forced to abandon him at two years old to ensure his safety. He was sent to Shamar, the only country on Mobius not infested with war. He would be raised by the Onueo, a tribe which descends from the aincent Echidna tribe.'''

'''Tyson, later nicknamed Ravoka, was raised by the Onueo and started training in the martial art Triex when he was five. Throughout this five years of training, his speed, strength and endurance increased dramatically, and Ravoka started defending the village from on-coming invaders. During this period, he also learnt why he had spikes on his knuckles. He was able to unsheath them into claws as an instant weapon.'''

''' Two years later, a swarm of Ludwig's robots came and overwhelmed Ravoka to the point of unconciousness. When he arose, the Onueo were murdered, the village was destroyed, and Ravoka was imprisoned by the Human empire.There, he met Micheal, mostly known as Pyrrhos, a pyrokinetic fox who was captured by the Babylonians in Soleanna when he was only seven. The two became friends and Ravoka was told about something Pyrrhos was working on for the past 3 years. A cyborg armadillo crafted in the image of the late Mighty the Armadillo. Originally named Project Bust, this would be their ticket out of here. After displaying incredible agility during their escape, it was later named Flip. '''

An estimated six other Mobian escaped due to Flip's actions, and it would be the trio's goal to find each escapee to help them fight off the Human threat.

That's all I was able to come up with as of yet. I just want to make sure if you're comfortable with Alinoa being included in this story (possibly as one of the escapees?).

So yeah, that's pretty much all. Live long and five.

The most smexy individual in the multiverse just signed this so be grateful plz! (talk) 06:05, January 30, 2015 (UTC) 