Talk:Nocturn the wolf/@comment-4386398-20131127150324

Wow another Mary-sue :D

Omg lets party -.-

First, change her species. Take an animal you really like and make her be it.

Then, the design. It looks like a blue and yellow Amy. Try other hair styles, clothes and such. Also make it fit her new species.

Give her a better name and nicknames.

Take out most of the powers, and keep a single one.

Take out all the super forms as well.

Remake everything in her story. Try another way she and her bro have been separated. Or don't separate them at all. If you want them separated, try something SIMPLE. Don't complicate yourself. For example, their parents divorced and they have been separated.

In other words, completly remake her.

Hope you accept my constructive critism.

You will have enough time to remake her, in you block period.