User blog comment:The-Bismarck/Character Review's/@comment-25020838-20140622181423/@comment-24872060-20140623223040

Character Name: Lucentio the Immortal

- Picture & Drawing Category:  10/10 There is no evidence of any recolors on his page. Nice art work.

- "Fact's about the character" Category:  9/10 There could be a few more facts about him.

- Bio & Back Story Category:  8/10 The Bio seems interesting, but I see you're still working on it. When you are done with it let me know, I would like to read it.

- Power & Weakness Category:   8/10 I have never seen this type of power before on a character, which is good. But theres a problem, if he changes to paper would water also be a weakness?

- Item & Weapon Category:  4/10 I can see that Lucentio can create weapons, but does he have a specific weapon of choice?

- Spelling & Grammar Category:  7/10 There are a few spellings errors, including some unnecessary caps.

- Overall rating:  7/10  This character seems to be interesting, there are a few flaws in his page that can be "ironed" out. Other than that, you did a good job on him.

Note: This is just my opinion, so please do get aggressive at me :). Have a nice day!