User blog:CrusherKitty/Hedge the Hedgehog Review

Hoo boy, this is a long one...

Bio
Name:Hedgerian Blackstone

Other names:Hedge Hedge Gender:male

Age:32 mentally unknown

Eh?

eye color gold

Animal: short quill hedgehog, angel

Born: another dimension

'Which dimension? Where? When? I am confused. Sorry.'

Lives:under the forest in a hidden base

Love interest: none

Sexuality:Strait

Relatives:brother Flash the cheetah, brother.

'How is Flash his brother? He's a hedgehog, Flash is a cheetah... Unless they're step-brothers or something...?'

Friends: fast the hedgehog, the chaotix not mighty,rouge the bat, e-123 omega, flash, shadow, Tesla, River the echidna, put your character here may be moved

Enemies: eggman, flash, put your character here may be moved Hedge The Peterbilt He's a truck

Weapons & Powers
Weapons:gold sword can control elements, shadow blade can control shadows and evil,

Powers:Chaos spear, blast,control, and chaos search, Chaos corruption, Chaos serenity,metalkineses mechakeneses

'What is mechakeneses? You could just say telekenisis and they would be fine in itself.'

chaos search helps see what others can't like someone invisible or where someone has been, metalkinesis can move metal with his mind, mechakinesis can absorb most devices and upgrade anything with absorbed power, chaos corruption corrupts the targets soul driving them into darkness causing them to turn evil and insane angry loyal to the user etc them results are unknown. if the character has a dark counterpart in there BIO then chaos corruption shuts down the light counterpart and grants control to the dark side, chaos serenity is polar oppisate to chaos corruption and will undo the effects of chaos corruption

'I would prefer to have some balance here. I can tolerate Chaos Powers, if the character has a good explanation behind them being able to use them, but a gold sword that can control elements and a shadow blade that can control shadows and evil seems a bit far-fetched to me, this basically sort of says 'Nothing can harm me if I have these weapons in hand'. '

Back story
This anthropomorphic hedgehog doesn't come from Sonic s world. At the age of nine an unknown force attacked his town. He was knocked into the fountain and swallowed the emerald by mistake. The chaos energy sent him to Mobius and infused itself into his now chaos blood.

'Mm, here's where things go a bit awry... I imagine a Chaos Emerald is quite a bit bigger than the gullet of a anthropomorphic hedgehog, much less, how did he get it out of him? It's too powerful to just be digested and I do not want to know what happened when he next went to the toilet o.o'

'He also unknowingly used Chaos Control to get out of a town that was attacked by something unknown? I feel that that was just put in there for plot convenience :S'

'Also, why was a Chaos Emerald on a fountain, loose? Any old villain could have just come along and snatched it up and made off with it.'

'I can understand fusing Chaos Energy though, that seems... Plausible for the Sonic universe.'

'One more thing... I would have suspected it wouldn't be Chaos Emeralds if he was from another dimension. Like Blaze's universe has the Sol Emeralds instead, I would have suspected that this universe would have something different.'

weakness
But surely he could just use his gold sword and shadow blade to control the fire and demon energy anyway, so that makes those two redundant, but mind control may also be a bit far fetched, as many people avoid characters with that, so they aren't accused of God-modding, metagaming, etc.
 * fire
 * mindcontrol
 * demon energy

Theme song
Bad Religion - Supersonic

hedges theam song

quotes
And who might you be ( saying hi or caches spy's thieves etc off Gard)

You thought you had me. Evil I smell you're evil. (finds out the new guy is a villain)

THIS IS WHAT IT MEANS TO BE FREE (in robot voice) (when eggman has mind-control over him)

Only one is a match for me and it's not you (fighting anyone but flash)

Do you ever quit? (fighting flash)

I'm imperfect (When someone thinks he's perfect and says so)

'A bit of formating is in need here. I will post a formatted version below.'

"And who might you be?"

"You thought you had me. Evil. I smell you're evil."

"THIS IS WHAT IT MEANS TO BE FREE!"

"Only one is a match for me and it's not you!"

"Do you ever quit?"

"I'm imperfect..."

'Isn't that much better? You can use that if you want to.'

trivia
'Nothing to say about this really. I can't say much about trivia.'
 * hedge always fights deffencif even if he knows his opponent
 * hedges eye color changes when somebody mind controls him or another soul they change to mach the controller.
 * Has a long tongue
 * Ears will twitch at danger unseen or if someone pokes them
 * Hedge didn't always have red fur his fur used to be mixed green around the arms blue around the legs yellow on his head orange on his body and pink quills

Alt Forms
Freedom fighter Hedge 'Mm... I don't have much to say about these. I get that not many of them are used in roleplays, so I cannot say too much.'
 * PURE EVIL
 * GENDER BEND
 * FUTURE
 * SOULLESS
 * EXE

Pure evil Hedge
Hedge host's two souls in his body one good and one evil.

'Oh dear, are we going down the bipolar route? I'm sorry, I don't like that in characters :S'

personality

he has a manipulative personality he'll change it to help get what ever he wants.

he tends to open up to other villains but will trick anyone with good intanshinse

appearance
alone he looks like hedge but with ruby red eyes

at full power his fur is a purple black mix. his gloves become his hands because his real hands are  black tenticals so yeah don't mess with him also his quills become crystal like and you could see yourself in one

weapons
wips, nine tail, yellow rod, your secret

nine tail is evil Hedges weapon of choice a tripill ended wip with steal claws at the end of each end so this wip tears through it's enemy's, but isn't used often.

I thought a nine tail whip had nine tails with tassles tied in the end (Oh God, how did I know that? I didn't even search it up...), it would only be called a three tails I guess if it was only a triple ended whip.

yellow rod is a yellow wip with lightning powers both deal and absorb lightning

'Can he summon lightning? I don't think lightning is an often accurance in Mobius, so uh... This is a bit redundant.'

your secret is a wip forged from dark energy with strange powers. for one it alters one perspective, and then it makes them feel alone, hopeless, and betrayed regardless of will power. each wip drives the victim deeper to insanity.

'Huh, 'Your secret' is a good name for it actually. But why would dark energy make someone feel those emotions? Last I checked, dark energy usually made someone feel powerful, angry, full of energy and willing to destroy many. But that's just me.'

powers
'A permanently twisted soul? Don't run into Hedge on a Pure Evil day. O.o' 'Does it effect the person? Make them righteous if you took away all their darkness? Does it make them pure evil, does it leave the original? That could backfire for him to be honest.' 'Oh, right! Illusions! Ah, I get it. Okay, this is a little bit OP, but then again, evil versions of characters are known for being OP.'
 * Soul bend:twist the soul energy to change the person completely. almost irreversible like he'd want to. must be at full power to use
 * Soul army: can take someones darkness and manifest it into a pure evil version of them to do his biding
 * jinx hand: can redirect almost any projectile or magic back to sender and banish illoshins

weakness
when shearing a body he can't reach full power

overconfident frustrated easily when plans fail

goal:make everything his kingdom

'A simple goal for a pretty evil guy. Fair enough, if a little bit cliché.' INSaNiTY Frost Mix (English)

evil hedges theam

Trixi [ gender bend]
Unlike most gender bends hedge is his gender bend he can become her with a gender bender device he has

that's all sorry no more may take any ideas though

'Whoa, Hedge has a genderbend device? MAKE THIS A ROLEPLAY NOW, I'M SERIOUS, THAT COULD BE HILARIOUS, PLEASE!'

Old Hedge
this is hedge in the future his fur is gray and he's smarter not much else to say.

'With age comes wisdom. I would call him 'wiser', not 'smarter', but okay.'

Crisis Hedge
working on this hedge lives in crisis city fighting every day for his life and friendship unlike modern hedge crisis will befriend you half the time good or bad

appearance

wears a military vest and pants also missing an arm replaced now with a robot arm

Shadow the hedgehog - me against the world (Simple Plan)

crisis theme goal:restore the future

How'd he get to the future?

Soulless Hedge
this hedge is meant for nothing but to destroy he appears when hedge thinks nothing is left in life and proceeds to end all life good or bad. if you make him appear  than you've just done something wrong.

appearance

glowing white fur  pitch black eyes personality

glum, hopeless goal: end everything

will not use in rp gmod form

'Dark and edgy Hedgy! Oh my God, did I just...? Whatever. Anyway, I feel that this could just not be here and nothing else would be affected.' Sonic the Hedgehog His World - Sad Version (Violin Intrumental) EXTENDED

Soulless Hedges theme old Solaris Sad Remix-0

Souless Hedges theam curent

Hedge exe
Sonic.exe Hill (White World Remix)

exe is behind you. Hedge exe is when an exe takes his soul he then becomes it's slave

Appearance

fur dull and gray is stained with blood his quills are ragged and limp like human hair. gloves are torn long black claws show the kind that make it hard to grab eyes the same as any exe red and soulless black

personality

has two


 * 1) he will act sad and depressed like he is empty but don't let it fool you he only wants you to think he's still in there before you know it it's to late
 * 2) childish he acts like a five year old wanting to play, and he can be found talking to imaginary parents

goal:please his master

'An EXE form... Okay, well, I don't have anything to say. Just am EXE form.' Sonic.exe Hill (Classic Sonic Remix)-0

hedge exe's battle theme Hedge.EXE

Remnants
Eh?
 * Ben

Flash the cheetah
Flash is shadows brother who's also brothers with hedge

'It is near impossible to be Shadow's biological brother. How is he also brothers with Hedge? It's just a bit of a plot hole, but if there is more to come soon, I look forward to an explanation.'

more to come soon

TEAM DESTRUCTION
A TEAM MADE UP OF BROTHERS HOLDS HEDGE IS THE SPEED AND LEADER OFTEN STAYING ON A SET GOAL HE'LL TRY TO FIND TREASURE IF HE CAN.
 * HEDGE
 * Fast The hedghog
 * FAST
 * FLASH

FAST IS THE FLY IN THE GROUP AND A STRONG ONE TO BE CARRYING A HEDGEHOG AND A CHEETAH HIS FLYT COMES FROM HIS HOVER SHOES

FLASH IS AN ALL AROUND BUT PROVES BETTER STRENGTH THAN EATHER HEDGE OR FAST WITCH IS A BIT WEIRD TO BE SO STRONG WHEN HE'S A CHEETAH

'Capitals aren't really needed here. Anyway, not much to say about this either.'

'Now for the final score... Hedge... Needs a lot of work. From the looks of things, he's been on this wiki a while, so you're bound to have had plenty of tips for improvement prior to this.'

'1. Please sort out the grammar and spelling. Sometimes it can be difficult to understand.'

2. The layout is a bit sporadic, The links to videos could have a separate section, but this page is long enough as it is.

'3. Maybe scrap some of the forms. 'Pure evil', 'Soulless' and 'EXE' Hedge aren't really needed. If they have been utilized in roleplays, ignore me, it's a good idea to have them on there if they have been used, but I haven't seen them used. I feel like they're just filler and they don't develop the character at all.'

'I would give this character a 3/10, I'm sorry Hedge, but I just can't find myself believing these things really happened, like swallowing a Chaos Emerald, if Flash is his brother, how come they dislike each other so much? If they're from a different dimension that was attacked, how is Flash Shadow's brother? So many questions remain unanswered. If you could give us worthwhile explanations and more depth on him, I will happily review him again and hopefully give him a higher score, improvement is needed I'm afraid.'

Sorry if you feel like I'm being too harsh, but that is genuinely how I feel.