Talk:Nocturn the wolf/@comment-5419873-20131127170602

Here let's just say this

Things that need to be changed

1. The Character Design, Try to do something else other than Amy Rose, Remember this is a Sonic Fan character wiki, and not a Sonic Recolor Wiki.

(Base edits are fine, but atleast don't make them seem exactly like the same base)

2. Forms, Either 1. Remove two forms or 2. Make it when she harnesses ALL the Chaos Emeralds, and not just by touching. 3.

3." Luna is the mystic being of night and shadows this enables her to turn into a shadow and slip away unseen" None of dis.

she also has insane agilitly, None of dis either

can run as fast as sonic, Nonopenoepnnoenopenoenopeonepneope. No. Sonic is the fastest thing alive, and that's that.

enables a super form with a shadow emerald, NONE OF THIS.

can transform in a cat named moonstar, has nine lives due to once being the leader of thunderclan This count's as a form, either get rid of this form. or get rid of the other forms.

We'll give you a week to make this better, and if we see improvements we won't canidate this for deletion.