Talk:Melvin Claire/@comment-4107522-20170315022646/@comment-27992714-20170315100129

Don't worry, I have it saved on a document. And I know, but I feel it's a teensy bit too close to Clark Kent territory. The backstory can still probably be salvaged, I just need to change some things.

These are the things that I'm currenty thinking about changing:

~The fate of Inigmuth and it's inhabitants.

~The reason why Melvin had to go to Ta'Loih and what age he was when he arrived.

~How he got there and where he landed.

~What he did there when he arrived and if he was aware of his abilities already. (And if not, what his 'call to adventure' moment was.)

~Theodore and his families' role.

I'll email you the draft version whenever I have one ready.